I hope you still are or already have finished working on this song, it sounds great so far. Here i am just discovering it almost 13 years later, please post the finished work on it, its an amazing start

Sweet!

I like it even though its not finished! Heard all of your songs pretty sweet, motivating you to finish this one and make more! =) Keep up the good work!

not enough

its un finishd yes so no 10 but look if you add sum nice sweet background drums or you know skin instruments or sumting with a clam back gorund beta it would top it off and you be able to get more options for ending but tats wut i think

Honestly.

The piano sounded dull and boring.

Nice

Excellent stuff going on =D. Again as you know im picky about FL keys but that's not going to lower the score just cause im racist against certain piano sounds!

This song could also use the Monk humming idea. But maybe even munks singing or find a low choir that could easily be used as monks singing?

10/10
5/5

This song is fairly decent. (Length is too short but thats probably cause you havn't finished yet....oh duh it says "demo" haha im so stupid)