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Sadly the sound lacks some quality. Everything sounds as if it had been recorded in a can, or something. Especially the drums sound pretty lame.

The vocals are overamplifyied, so I think you should turn down the volume of the mic when recording this. Also, they aren't in time with the background music, I think, so you should try and work on that.

2 tracks in a day? nice!

again it just seems that the screaming is off on the song.. Doesn't go with the rytem of the song dude. Thats the biggest problem. I'd love to help you get past that. The screaming would work if you just timed it juuuust right. Either way i hear some good musical talent here!

Ouch

I'm not sure what you're trying to pull off, but the shouting hurt my ears. No offense. You need to reduce the volume of the shouting, either by reducing the volume of the shouting track or by applying compression.

Hope this helps.