One of my serious peices. The equalizer might be abit off.. www.nyran-online.com
Pretty deep
And here was something pretty deep sounding and looks like you really put some time and effort into this one, the sound really comes out well, its nothing crazy but you bring it with all these deep sounds and really create a world there and for that you have done what others have not, so nice job here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of that lightning or thunder would really do this more justice.
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good
Song almost sounds like a civil war battle field. Nice work.
It kinda' sounds like a Cilivil War, however i don't really know what this song sounds like lol.
Thanks for the comment,
Decerto
not bad.
it has a kind of sound to it that you don't hear much. There are a few places you may want to work on because i see potential for this to be something better then it is but yeah its pretty good now.
3/5
I actually enjoyed the sweetness of this tune. The strings were a good touch. The cello is a bit loud in the beginning, but the sound effects helped it. Next draft, turn down the snare a bit, and make it more background-ish as a support rather than a lead. The solo violin was very appropriate for this song, and gave it a melody. Overall, good work! You definitely have potential as a future artist and composer. Just keep working on it. You're getting there! Good job!
Also, add a little reverb to some of the instruments to give it atmosphere. That's what it is missing.
Like the last reveiwer, i'll try and take on board your comments to try and make the peice better :) Thanks for your kinds words <3 :)
Thanks again,
Decertp
very good idea
BUT you need to fix up some parts.
GOOD::::\
The background sound effects were a very good idea
Pretty good idea for the actual music
Had some emotions in it
BAD:::::/
Some of the sound effects came on and left too abruptly make it more subtle
Bit too simple lacked complexity. Soften the cello a bit at the start too.
In the section with the drums the snare and cymbal stuck out too much and I'm not sure if they were 100% in time (maybe ad a snare roll somewhere?)
The solo violin too piercing sounding
In the drummed section the sound was thin needed some more voices make it fuller
Lacked some form. After the drummed section it just dropped back to what it was like at the start when it should have intensified.
All in all this idea has enormous potential just improve those parts I mentioned. PM me when/if you do another version I will check it out.
Thanks for the comment, i'll try taking on board what you've said and try and make the song better :)
Decerto
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Decerto 
