Cool

Well this was a cool tune you have here the sound was good the "VOCALS" could be much better maybe more training on sound and such would really make this even better But for what it is it was a nice tune you have presented here with a nice style of work, so keep that element up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The vocals could be a tad bit better.

~X~

Ignoring recording problems...

Nice bass sound (atmospheric sounds in the background is pretty cool.) The bass gets too heavy, if it were not for the bad recording quality this would make a hell of a kick ass song with the drums and the solo like sound, it still is awesome either way. Song is a 5/5 (ignoring the recording.) Once again nice bass line. Weird ending.

Alright

A really good song, nice sounding overall. The lyrics were really good, and your voice was excellent, with a few exceptions where it kinda sounded if it was about to break. But the track was really good, but I did feel the guitar was a little too chunky sounding for the most part, would've liked to heard it a little cleaner.
But a really good song never the less

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Pleasant enough... but formulaic.

Though distortion in the vocals kinda fits the tone, some of the distortion seems to be because of the recording.

It kinda hurt my head after a while, listening to the distortion you have in the guitars and everything.

The instruments are well placed and I liked the sorta rising synth notes you have at the start.

However, it starts to feel a little bit derivative. The places where the guitars come in work well but it all sounds kinda formulaic. I like to be surprised when listening to a tune - I love it when it takes a turn that I didn't expect but still fits somehow. That never really happened here.

It's a well made tune. The distortion gives it a real 'garageband' feel and it was pleasant enough to listen to.

It just never lit my fire.

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Very Good :D

I think this is a very song, the vocals are done very well here and I like to hear some songs that have vocals in the audio portal, it's nice to hear them. So thanks for submitting this for one thing. Although the vocals do sound a little distorted, they do seem to fit into this pretty well and some of the background music is distored to, but I think it works.

Everything sounds to be well played here too, the into is good and the ending part to this is also done very well. Everything here seems to come together very well, so good job overall on this.

5/5

<3

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