Well... the reason why it's mostly a piano accompaniment is because it's a lonely song. The points where the other instruments came in are the stress points of the song. ^_^

I have a secret weapon coming up... once he's done recording vocals, you'll be up for something really wicked!!! ;-)

Well... frankly put, I wish I can hit the notes longer. Not exactly the best suited vocalist for this song. Maybe if I take voice lessons, I can hit it right, hehe.

Hmm... didn't notice the mic clipping, but yeah, there is popping. Didn't have a pop filter yet when I recorded the vocals (I have one now; might re-record when I get the time).

Thanks for your review and 9! ^_^

Ok, thanks for your insight.

Hey thanks again! ^_^ Well... voice still needs work (self-taught; still learning). Regarding the structure of the song, if you follow the lyrics, it's a build-up of tension and confusion. The ending is open-ended. You may interpret it as a resolution or further confusion or despair.

I'll give that site a try, but I'll work on my vocals first before posting there. Again, thanks a lot!

Hey thanks for the ten! ^_^