Eh...
It needs more energy! Put some soul into it, there's no real melody, it doesn't stick out...
Pretty self explanatory...vocals start shaky, but it ends on two feet.
Eh...
It needs more energy! Put some soul into it, there's no real melody, it doesn't stick out...
I like this song.
I like this song, but with a little more rehearsal it could sound perfect. Keep at it you have a very nice voice but you still have a ways to go.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.