The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 8.0 / 10
Looks nice i whold love to use this in a flash game one day
Author's Response:
thanks ;)
Its the secrete spot where they inform each other at. Its a calm look at the dark and deep deeds. Blue makes the picture not scary at all.
Author's Response:
cool review
and thanks :)
this background isnt as calm it fills you more with a sense of fear. the tree doesnt feel real maybe a little more shading might help it and it almost looks detached from the mountain. this scene feels well off kind of and i miss the mist that brought it all together. great work though still.
Author's Response:
i went pretty half-assed with this one actually :c
YOU RUINED IT! although, the reflection is still great. but you still removed the whole calm and peaceful look
Author's Response:
i think i'll do it...again lmao and thanks :)
Looks fantastic!
The only thing I could suggest is add some white (or just really light) coloured highlights around the outside edges of things facing the moon.
Keep your current shading, with just some extra accents facing the moon.
I especially love the north light-like sky, and the awesome reflection affect you have on the water.
No idea how you did that, but it looks super!
Author's Response:
Good suggestion, I'll remember to do so if I work on this again.
And thanks for the review ;)
Theres somthing you missed! something i liked in the first one! The lighting you put along the grass! D: the colour combonation is pretty good, and yet a fantastic job on the water. Try making the tree a little darker since it's facing awayfrom the moon, having it like that doesn't really sem right. The foffy sky night is fantastic, much beter then the first one. and with the rock sticking up over the water, try adding a few twigs along it's under side
The shading you did with the land is pretty good, sorry if I can't come up with much to say for this one, other then it does look better then the first one other then those few minor things. i'de scou yea but I have to be rescouted my self. (gotta draw more stuff >_<)
Author's Response:
Thanks again for your constructive criticism, I'll change those things when I get the chance :]
Too bad about the unscouting, I guess Newgrounds is only aiming for amazing graphics :p
