Wow this was pretty intense
Now this is one hell of a "WEB-COMIC" I love the black and white but not just your basic black and white but some deep shading and allowed for a darker element and vibe to it, this is the kind of "WEB-COMIC" I could really read over and over, now as a "SUGGESTION" My little tip here would be ad tid bits of color not alot so you dont take away from the comic but ad some color here and there, very nice comic you have here make more soon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My little tip here would be ad tid bits of color not alot so you dont take away from the comic but ad some color here and there
~X~
My Curse - Prologue
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Well... THIS is where it all started...
Back in 2008 i decided to join an OCT (Original character tournament) and develpoed the character 'Spoiler' for it. This is where he took his roots, and as you saw from my flashes he's changed alot in this year and a half.
This part shows a glimpse of Spoilers past during a thunderstorm in Brostel, introducing another 2 key characters...
must say that
you have a good potiental of making comics om sure that a company will like to buy it
cool =)
Nice, i like the funky strip layouts and the art style which will eventually develop to look great =) not sure what the second to last panel is though... maybe think about the layouts of the strips a bit more? but pretty cool comic, good luck yeah +D
-will
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