and here it really gets started

So the comicis really shaping up at this point, with alot of action scenes and i really like how you were working out of the box in this one, it gives that real comic touch and thats why iam taking a big liking of this, so nice job there and props to you on an outstanding piece. hope to see more of your work soon, now as for improving as i have mentioned in the past and seems like you went with a differant style of a more comic style but anyways good stuff regardless.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing here as it was top notch just keep doing what you been doing, its great stuff, no improvments needed at this point.

potenial

i like your drawings too, when i saw all these colours i thought "i had to read this".
i hope you succeed in your drawing career (if thats what it is), anyway great stuff.

Awesome!

I don't know how this got an "M" rating, but I'm a big fan of yours and this is a cake of awesome.

Reminds me of Full Metal Achemist for some reason.

If the chick in red was guy of course. Still badass though. BTW, what program did you use?

:D Amazing

This is the coolest style on NG :3