Oh nifty

Ok so this was something nifty, it has the feel and touch of that just like a reall "COMIC" it has all the elements of an action packed comic book, with some good action scenes, i think that some of the text boxes could be better though, maybe you could have more larger text, and maybe even an added colored border, but anyways this was a good art piece and i was glad i had a chance to review this so nice job all around here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned maybe some larger font/text maybe even some colorful borders around the bubble boxes.

spleens and eyeballs eplode 30% of the time?

And is it just me or does Seraphis get creepier every time we see her?