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Mwais IV

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Fourth version of a drawing I remade a few time.

You can see the comparison of all the versions of the drawing here: http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/127/b/4/drawing_improvement_ii_by_zetrystan-d7hi4lt.png

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So here was a nother fine character you have here, I like all the little extras you have here, The expression on his face was odd but overall this was a nice character design you have here, I would add some glaring shine on the pieces in the backround, anyways nice work here.

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I would add some glaring shine on the pieces in the backround

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Gotta say, I actually preferred your 2011 version. The way you did the line-work was much more interesting, by using different coloured lines rather than simply black. I feel like at least the facial hair in this piece would have benefited from your 2011 line style. I honestly think that your desire to add "more details" is an unnecessary one, considering the style of these pieces I'd say that less is more.

ZeTrystan responds:

I understand that. Actually... I wanted to add colored line! But I was dumb and I made the mistake to flatten the lines with the thick black line around the character, so I wasn't able to easily paint my lineart.

But thanks a lot for your small critique, I appreciate it.

Neat. Love the details on the clothes.

ZeTrystan responds:

Thanks a lot! I tried to put more on them than usual.

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