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Goretober 24 - Crushed

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Very justified claustrophobia.

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plz stahp just stahp i cnt deal with it just stahp

ZeTrystan responds:

oké

The walls were speaking to each other, they said:

Wall 1: "Hey, you said that kid right there?"
Wall 2: "Where?"
Wall 1: "Right in front of you stupid."
Wall 2: "Oh yeah."
Wall 1: "We should crush him because he looks stupid and stuff and we're bigger than him"
Wall 2: "Hehe, alright E-Wall."

Then the poor kid got crushed... But you know who that kid was?

All of us.

*Audience applause*

ZeTrystan responds:

That's deep and symbolism and stuff.

We are the kid now.

...

We are a squid now.

It started 30 years ago. The factory opened up, it was a humble jelly factory promising jobs for people. When it started no one looked twice at teh factory, it looked like a normal factory giving the only thing it promised, nothing less nothing more.

But then it happened, the son of one the local elite deissapeared, bounties where put up, everyone was looking for the kid and during the lookout many noticed there where more abandoned homes than usual, that was enough to get people's heads scratching.

After digging into the owers of the abandoned homes there was one thing that each one of them had in common, they all worked for the factory. People got outraged and demanded to enter the factory wich retaliated by closing their gates. People tried everything to get in the factory but they where always detained by security that never seem to have been there. They can't get a police warrant since there is no concrete evidence that the factory was kidnapping people and while reviewing the documents something appeared in them that no one remembered was there, it say'd that they would give "Jobs and housing".

No one believed it but they had no powers against the factory. It was then that people tried getting pro, calling in private detectives and even contacts in the underworld (crime underworld not demons) They where getting gadgets, blueprints, plans anything they needed for a heist, it wasn't just for the bounty anymore, it was for pride.

The raid started, they took a semi truck and rammed the front gate. The gate did not even bend even with the force of a 5 ton goliath ramming at it at aprox. 120 Km/h. But the towns people didn't stop there, they went so far, they couldn't just stop there they climbed over the fence guns blazing and the guards still didn't use any lethal means of extraditation of the premises. It was a massacre guards dropping left and right and nobody got to enter the factroty, everytime someone got close to the doors they where overwhelmed by the guards, the shootout kept on until all the ammunition was depleted.

All of the townsfolk went back to their homes defeated and shamed, they went in with enough ammunition to send a terrorist core to kingdom come and yet they failed. At that moment everyone noticed that all the bodies of the shootout dissapeared and for some reason the guards that normally only appeared when a tresspasser was present where now overwatching the factory 24/7. One foolish boy thought he had a chance at entering the premises without being seen and was surprisingly successful.

After climbing a few minutes the boy found the exit of the vents, it took him to a catwalk over the workers. The workers where all working like robots, they looked pale and some seemed insane and twitchy like if they didn't see sunlight for many years and there was no sound with the exeption of machienery. As the boy walked ontop of all of the pale, deadlike workers one rusty and old piece of the catwalk broke and the boy fell. He got up noticing that he was the center of attention amidst the the workers. after a few seconds of now complete silence one of the workers screamed "HEY! WHY ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR WORK STATION!?" with the silence broke all of the workers joined up screaming profanities calling him lazy and getting more and more furious at the mere presence of that boy. The workers started grabbing pipes and wrenches and many other things with harmful intent and the boy ran as fast as he could with the workersquickly rushing behind him, the boy ran to a door labeled "Jelly processing".

As soon as the boy exited the work station went quiet, like if they had completely forgotten of the boy's existence. While looking through the machienery the boy noticed a tube and in it was the local elite's child. The rich kid told the boy to help him and that he didn't know what was happening or where he was before the now scared boy could do anything the machine's walls started moving and quickly squishing the rich kid. The boy threw up as he took a moment to let the image sink in when suddently a hatch inside the tube opened letting out another rich kid who after making the same questions had the same fate as the first one. The boy now decided to go back up using a stairwell next to the tube.

On the superior level there where many other tubes filled with water with dorment rich kids. The boy decided to openone of them and out came a coughing and confused rich kid. As soon as the rich kid got a hold of himself alarms started tripping off and the two kids ran away through the same vent the boy had come in and nobody took time to notice how the broken catwalk was now repaired in a span of 10 minutes.

As the boys got out they tried to spread word about what was happening inside the factory but the townsfolk while rejoicing the return of the rich kid just wanted to forget about that god forsaken place. No one believed them, the boy's family got the bounty and because of the stories both of the kids got therapy all paid by the rich kid's family while they say'd they accepted the fact that they probably just made that up to repress memories we actually never stopped believing on what happened. The kids eventually became friends given the fact that one save the life of the other and they lived their lives never eating jelly again and pretending not to know what happened.

Why am i telling you this? I am the little boy who wandered into the factory and the reason is that you are still young and open-minded and this is just a friendly warning for you to stay away from that factory it's for our own good. I would go back there myself and end that operation but the vent that i came in has been reinforced and i don't see any other way of entering the factory. So for your own safety, stay away from the factory.

An/ Whew i feel like i've outdone myself here needless to say i took long to come with an initial idea and took even longer to write it. BTW i never plan my things out i just come up with an initial idea and just improvise it from there and i'm thinking of posting this in the creepypasta wiki or turning this into an SCP idk.

ZeTrystan responds:

Woaaaah. This is your longest story yet! And it was weird and fun to read! I was actually thinking about it, and it has that "Inside" vibe (if you know about that game).

Seriously, it's great! And I'm still impressed by the fact that you can improvise those! ;)

Very appropriate shirt :)

ZeTrystan responds:

Indeed! ;D

Ughhh I can't think of a pun because the thoughts I'm getting are being crushed by another thought. I'm sorry, this morning is squeezing me like toothpaste. I'll close in these thoughts for later.

ZeTrystan responds:

Aaaaand puns.

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