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3.25 / 5.00

Sep 3, 2014 | 4:25 AM EDT
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You know what? I would like people to tell me what I did right and what I did wrong and how I can improve.


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Rated 3 / 5 stars

I really like all of your drawings and this one is ok, but it does look like a man with boobs. Try softening the face, it may or may not work but perhaps it's worth experimenting with (I feel like i'm trying to teach you how to suck eggs lol). Also the boobs (and she has an amazing pair... i wish mine were like this!) don't look natural. Female boobs aren't that round (unless it's implants), they are a tear-drop shape so are thinner at the top and and fuller at the bottom. Think of the lady fun-bags as jelly (or jello if you're US) in a balloon, that's what they look like even on a muscular body. Unless you're actually going for the round implant look, then ignore all the above lol!!

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ZaneMudfish responds:

Lol! Thanks. That was actually my initial criticism of the picture, that her boobs look like stapled-on grapefruits. Haha I was going to draw them droopier, but then I was like, ehh new grounds will like it. As for her looking like a man with tits. She essentially is a man with tits. She's a bad ass super human body builder, so she's gonna have some rough edges haha. Anyway, thanks for taking time to critique it. :)