All around, it's an impressive piece.

Ok, so I won't beat around the bush, this isn't a perfect piece. The biggest thing I see here, is the fact that the lines are choppy as all hell and get out. It's so visible I can see it with out even doing a close up. Second, there is zero depth here, I mean, her shirt looks like it was cut out straight from the background, you really should have changed the color so it didn't match the background, you have the same problem with the head band. Also the hair looks like it could wrap her in a blanket of hair and then some. And over all, it just looks like you were doing this in MS paint. The art work is subpar at best.

So I bet your wondering, "So why the hell did you give me a 9/10" Well, I simply just adore the composure of the entire peice. The way her body is posed, the text, the birds in the corner and her facial expression are sublime in my eyes. If I could take this and touch it up with a better painting program as to give it depth and less rigidness, I wouldn't miss a beat. I would so put this on a shirt for a girl if it had been changed to "Attempting to care".

So all around, this was a good peice, despite some obvious flaws.