Nice

So Im not familuar with this story but the artwork you have here is pretty good very nice and smooth lines love the addition of the birds onlything this may need may be a sun burst of light or even sun shining somewhere in the backround Just some ideas that may enhance this beautiful piece already.

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onlything this may need may be a sun burst of light or even sun shining somewhere in the backround.

~X~

I can't recall the cat, but even if it's not in the story it's a nice addition to the drawing! Very happy painting overall, all the characters cheerful, the sky blue and cludy, it's simple and atmospheric, and the lines convey the motion as well. It brings back memories too, keep it up!

-cd-