awesome!

that would be me in a cartoon version (blond with green eyes and big boobs) very good art work. :)

Hm.

Ha! Its all coming back to me! I always had trouble drawing shoes Kind have your way of drawing them a bit! Dont listen to the "Harsh Reviews" It took me drawing shapes, dots, and stick figure battles around of homework. Practice makes perfect.Never was much of a color person always drew black in white. Trying to add color in what I do.. Great work!

Pretty good!

I agree with MaskDeUH on the proportion bit, while the upper arm looks normal, the forearm seems kinda stretched like taffy, though just a bit. The legs are a different story, one could say they're disproportionate, and a little wide, or that she is wearing really baggy pants.
I kinda like the shoes, they seem to fit well with the rest of the pic.

waw.. mcdonald shoes :D

yeah the only problem are her shoes... its not good.. not bad... 5 for you :D

Well...

I love the coloring on this pic overall. But I took off a couple points mainly for one reason. As I was scanning down the picture, I liked it. I got to her arm and hand, and those looked kiiiiiinda funky and misproportioned. But not bad, so I let that slide, then I got to her legs...Theyre a bit to short and stubby for her body, and her shoes are WAY too big for her. Overall, not bad. Casual improvement is all that is needed.