Author's Comments
My very first submission , there isn't much to say about this Line art. I personally like it and I hope you do as well.
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 9.4 / 10
Very nice art i have to say even if it is adult material. But what does the "CnD Special" mean?
Author's Response:
it means Cute and Deadly. That's what's written on her T-shirt.
It's normally her PJ.. even though it does not even reach her belly button.
I do wish I could draw the female body as gracefully as you.
Author's Response:
Looking at this picture makes me realise how I've improved. Heh.
But thanks for the comment , really :)
I dont like the bangs too much. lol. but thats just a personal thing. I really think shes hot and cute. Pretty clean for the most part. The person who commented on the boobs was on the right path. Those breasts are too large for there not to be a complete line underneith them. It would understandable if they were a bit smaller or if she was on her back... or in space.
Author's Response:
heh , I kind of improved ever since I submitted this one.
Every time I look at this picture , I see so many flaws.
Is it just me, or is it weird that the lines are incomplete under the breasts? I've seen the incomplete lines like that used for highlighting, but this is underneath, and there's no obvious light source below the subject.
in regards to the left breast in particular, the line on the far right is not completely curved, especially towards the bottom right (you'll see a point where it's kinda flat, and there's a soft angle there, rather than a curve). My suggestion in that regard is to redo the lines with a line tool in PS/GIMP/etc.
I like the eyes. well spaced and whatnot.
I LOVE IT
Author's Response:
Yes , you do ;)
Very well done. The lines are clean the the hentai aspect leaves the viewer wanting to see more. And i can't wait to see more of your work.
You have some impressive drawing skills man. I hope to see more of your work around hur. And as far as people wanting to see more of your hentai. Just draw whatever you feel like drawing dont succumb to the pressure of what others want. because then your not really expressing yourself are ya? :)
anything you post will be great i know it, cant wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Thanks , I appreciate the review.
Really , I do.
her left breast is off. i cant tell what but it just looks... i dunno nevermind
really cool picture
I've always been a big fan of Lineart.
Everything seems pretty good, except her left breast seems funky...or should I say the right breast from my point of view?
hmmm...
I'm favoriting you in hopes to see more awesome pieces of work.
=]
Author's Response:
To be honest , I don't think I will post more Hentai drawings.. Because It's not really what I like to draw. This was an exception considering most people likes to use the Adult Section.
It's a kind of.. bait for them to see my other work.
Then again , who knows what might happen and I might start drawing hentai without knowing why and will probably submit it here.
i'd love to c it in color tho
Author's Response:
I'm still trying to perfect my Lineart before starting to color my work.
I still don't own a tablet to draw on the computer either. But In due time!
I like ur pic man its very nice and hot
overall very good for a first submission hopr to see more from you in the future
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
