I LOVE it,
Only the background shouldn't be just grey...
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miku-hatsune i <3 yu XD
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Whore4Blues responds:
HURR DURRR
This being old work, I'm not sure I should critique it, as you've probably already figured out most of what I'd say.
Bah. I'll say one thing: let your coloring handle the shading under her arm. Otherwise, you get armpit hair. Yeah, I assume you've fixed that by now, but I decided to critique whichever picture popped up in the portal next and this one popped up.
Her shirt collar... wait, there's no point in critiquing this further, is there? Your more recent stuff is better, anyway.
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