Author
Quincy (Vortex00)
Date Submitted
08/24/2009 | 04:11PM EST
Category & Size
Fine Art | 841 x 1500 px
Current Score
0.00 / 5.00
0 votes | 10,507 views
Author's Comments
Time to post some stuff on the more serious side of things... Some of you may know that I can do more stuff besides anime, some of you don't. This is kind of a mix in my style between anime and real. Might finish up some other similar stuff later.
This is what I'd figure be a more realistic version of my character Nari.
I didn't put this in the portal because I'm not so much caring for the 'voting' going on in there.
So if you are here that's mean you went out of your way to get here, and I thank you for that...
And since you went out of the way.. I'm not in the mood to hear your QQ'ing about boobs. You will be flamed.
And for those about to seriously critique this XD... Some things to note:
I realized I rushed the hair.
I know the naval area is too high up.
I realize the lingerie would not flow like that around the hips.
So if you notice anything else feel free to mention it XD
might redo the hair later.
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 9.7 / 10
"Camon baby, do you need the top" said atleast a million men on this Earth
As said before, just keep up the good work, it's great
in the thumbnail version, i saw a realistic-type face, and i thought, "well, this probably wont be as good as the others...." but i click, and... HELLO! very sexy. im definitely NOT one to critique on the little things, i really don;t give a shit, this is GOOD ART.
Author's Response:
lol thanks
I like your realistic art better than you anime style art. You don't need to redo the hair, it's fine that way. Everyting looks really nice, the coloring and the shading are perfect. I love her face, she's a lot cuter than her anime counterpart. Nothing to improve, but she'd look more realistic if her fingers had nails.
It would be nice to see more drawings with this style, upload them and we'll give you feedback ;)
5/5 and 9/10
Author's Response:
Thanks, will do. Currently I've been hammering away at some flash though ><
You know, for a more realistic take on one of your character, the coloring still seems anime-ish. Maybe it's just me, but this drawing looks too shiny...
Putting that aside, this is a great piece of work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I like the shine, it's just a personal thing.
Her hair looks a little action figure looking, but thats okay I fuck up on my hair on my characters as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks, yeah I was lazy with the hair.
Although there some spots that needs improving (like the eyes for example it looked like that this was a photograph but that's just me) still it's not gonna hurt your score. Though it maybe inappropriate for my taste, it still gets a high score, so 5/5 10/10.
-Jim46-
Author's Response:
This picture is a modified version of a really old drawing that was referenced from a magazine picture.
More naked ones would be good.
Author's Response:
yes, yes it would. I'd have to prepare to the QQ'ing though.
taking note of what you already spotted yourself... im going to do it and say... nice realistic looking bust on her... i can see where most of your time was spent on this drawing... love the fine work on the dress in the same area... im finding it hard to spot anything you havent already picked out... athough i do feel her face could use with some adjustment... her mouth to nose area looks like shes twiching... and the more i look at it the more i feel its strange... possibly make the eyelids a bit darker so they dont blend in the with skin... apart from that... mabey add a bit more shading on places... such as the ribbon/string... and areas which are one tone such as between her bust and under her arm might benifit the use of a darker tone... but thats just a though... liking it alot... the hair as you said was rushed... it looks rather blocky if that makes sence... cant wait to see what she looks like after you fixed her up... :3
Author's Response:
no more darker tones >_>;
This is an awesome mix between manga and realism, only problem I have is that she's rather skinny and kinda tall, Nari was kinda round, and chunky wasn't she? And I think her hair had a little more volume too, She's looks great but it looks like Nari had an extreme make over, liposuction that whole thang =\
Author's Response:
You'd be correct, wow know Nari pretty well XD
It was closer to what you mentioned in earlier stages of the picture, but it wasn't looking right. I'll see if I can make it closer looking to Nari, lazily, with the liquify tool >_>;
U r an amazing artist! im jelous. u r a master
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm not a master just yet XD
she is hotter than lava!
Author's Response:
welcome to the party :)
