Author
Quincy (Vortex00)
Date Submitted
06/17/2009 | 08:10PM EST
Category & Size
Illustration | 1112 x 1776 px
Current Score
4.58 / 5.00
652 votes | 20,591 views
Author's Comments
Original character Nari
So! I've finally managed to find some time to edit through the RAW recording that has been sitting around for a while, and made a two part time lapse video.
And since some spiteful Newgrounds users are trying their very best to direct traffic to me in a negative way, I'll take this opportunity of enhanced exposure to post these videos for you.
All in all, this is something like what it takes to make something like this. There are imperfections in it, but it takes effort, and if you can look at the whole picture and not just focus on the breasts, you can see there is a certain balance in this picture.. also.. If you don't like the music I don't really care. If you do, I still don't care.
(remove the spaces)
part1:
http://www.vortex00.com/B BS/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=39
part2:
http://www.vortex00.com/B BS/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=40
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 9.0 / 10
And the lighting is excellent. Also, you're GOOD at drawing hair. Lucky.
Author's Response:
Thanks I try, there's still much room to improve.
all i have to say is wow. 10/10
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Thanks
Nothing to say but bravo my friend you make some pretty swell art all of them were great.
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Thanks
You really have mastered the Perfect female anime body.
Im sitting here in total awe, seriously.
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Thanks
Oh damn not again
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heh
Nice, i liked it.
Just wondering if you wanted to make a collab just message me about it.
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Thanks..
This piece is rather good. I'm not a huge fan of anime, but the artistry is fantastic. One thing I enjoyed was that you have the one thing that guys love to see, (Although most will deny it, and call me stupid) which is the spaghetti strap falling off of her shoulder. Which of course can only mean that she has baby fine skin. Though one thing I wasn't too keen on, was she has barely any facial expression. I can see that she's winking and blowing a kiss...but it seems a bit robotic to me. Maybe put a tad more more seductivity into the open eye. Close 'em a bit, angle the outside just a tad upwards.
Author's Response:
Good analysis. I'll definitely keep that in mind, thanks.
very nice, your brilliant at this stuff :)
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Thanks :)
sexy
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thanks
Your a really good drawer.........
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Thanks
I thought only funny, sexually repressed japanese men could draw so well. Or are you... ;-)
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Negative.
Why do dipshits vote low to hate? This is very enticing to me. I love the shadow of the window... it accentuates her curves very nicely up front.
I would give a 10, but in between her thighs is a little too symetrical and I think it takes a little bit away from the view of her bending over. Overall I think this is hot.
4/9
Author's Response:
Thanks, I see what you mean.
Dude, I'm a chick and a straight one at that. And this drawing makes me wanna...do things...with her...XD
Author's Response:
lol XD
Not only is her chest really big you did a excellent job on the shading (i like how you can even see the shadow of the window on her ha ha kewl :D)Good clothing design too. Her hair though, at the end of the curls they look kinda unrealistic-ya know?-like plastic, im not really sure if thats what you were going here for though. Still Great Job!
5/5
Author's Response:
Indeed. No, that wasn't what I was going for. I've been considering redoing the hair entirely. Maybe make like small hairs or something. Especially after someone mentioned it looked like chocolate XD And also fixing some color issues.
whats the goal exactly? (faved and fived)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
It's to see if you can notice and appreciate the less obvious things going on in here. I think this picture is good not solely because of her chest size but due to all the other things I spent a good amount of time trying to do. Lighting, eyes, hair, expression, mood etc.
You'll notice people mentioning these things, in there reviews, and I think that's a good thing. Of course I'll admit 'was' trying to make this character sexy as possible, because that was the request. But do you notice the other elements that make her sexy besides the chest size? That's the real question this picture secretly asks..
There's also a few major things wrong with this picture that none has mentioned thus far I'm sure someone will spot them eventually. Either way, I've started working on another lighting practice picture.. with this character ^^;
I have a boner. Pat yourself ona the back.
Author's Response:
That's honestly not the goal here XD
Thanks anyways!
not only is she hot but the amount of light and the shadow coming from the window hitting her body.... i thnk im in love
Author's Response:
I was working on lighting when I did this. I'll probably continue using this character for that.
catsonmyface we understand ur a girl but this doesnt mean u can ruin the fun.
the pic is awsome
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I think it's awesome too.
The woman body is damn hot....
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success!
I gotta say you have a great amount of skill in drawing, I like how you add a great amount of detail to every single part. Keep up the good work ^^
Author's Response:
Thanks, will do.
you are good man keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Will do.
THERE ONLY WORRIED ABOUT HOW LARGE HER CHEST IS SO THEY GIVE TEN POINTS BECAUSE OF IT!
Author's Response:
you are incorrect alt account, and because you decided to use an alt, I won't even bother wasting my time proving this to you.
I'm no artist, and I could never be, but my bro is and this would take him some time to do. Now, why are many people giving this a bad review? I do agree that art doesn't always need to be perverted, but this is not really perverted. Sculptors sculpt bare naked ass people ALL THE TIME! BTW it's an ART portal, base the score on THE ART. not cuz your a booby hating fag-o-tron. Sorry if I offended any homosexuals.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I agree.
To anyone that thinks "Boobs and Vaginas" don't qualify as art, take a look at a little thing called the Renaissance. Venus for starters and many other famous nudes exist from that time period. People like Da Vinci stared at "Boobs and Vaginas" for quite a time in order to draw such skilled anatomy.
But maybe I'm wrong? Perhaps stick figures are a better investment in the human artist's catalog. After all, five sticks and a torso are all most people like to see anyway right? (BTW that was all sarcasm)
To the artist, I loved your work. This is inspiring on many levels. I hope that I can shade my upcoming Iron Man piece as well as you shaded this one. Continue posting and remember that some people are just not meant for the world of art. (I won't mention any names, but I think we all can see who those people are based on certain reviews...)
Author's Response:
Thanks, well said. Also your Iron man is looking pretty damn good so far. I've never really worked much on coloring shinny metal.
i do think the skin is a bit pale and i think you may want to try less reviling clothing in the future i would like to see how it turns out
Author's Response:
Indeed, will do. I just like reading retarded comments like the one below, and this kind of work inspires it. But more importantly this was a request I got from a Youtube account. So I simply drew it as he wanted me to draw it.
This is pretty basic.It's very simple to get alot of good reviews. You just have to put something like boobs or some shit like that. People should stop acclaiming this cause really its pretty worthless.So basically you submit stuff like this cause you know all these people think it's hot.That's what makes the art portal bad cause of stuff like this.Really guys get a life besides staring at boobs and vaginas all day.
Author's Response:
you presume to know much about me, yet in actuality you don't. You also have no knowledge at all about the time and skill it takes to produce something like this. Lucky for you I don't feel like, or care about, proving how wrong you are. but! yo do need to chillbro.
Hmm, what I should exactly say now? Well, let's keep this short but still great, all I can say about this, that this picture really is sweet and pretty, very nice work! Everything is so nicely and carefully made, light effects, great, eyes are great, everything is ^_^, okay I said this gonna be short but it's pretty long xD
Awesome job ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
*High Five* awesome man. just....yea....i already said it. The shadow curved on her body, the cross formation, looks as though it flows over her skin as a shadow should be, without flaw. Thats the one of the main perfections of that drawing. Her chest is quite full as well so thats a nice little score bumper dont ya think? lol. Anyway, love it, and wanna see more of it. Not in that way... well... a little... you understand of course.
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Author's Response:
Yes quite full indeed :3
I'll probably do some more not too far from now.
10/10 Dude that is hot
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:)
love it
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thanks
This drawing is supernatural!!!
I cant spot one flaw in this and the shadow shaped like a cross gives this gives a 100/10
Author's Response:
lol ^^; there's flaws, I was thinking about redoing this picture.
Yeah it was a lighting practice picture, the cross was like a shadow of window or something.
This is not rated teen, its clearly rated M fer mature....
Awsome drawing, I need to go clean up my nosebleed.
Author's Response:
It was rated teen originally. I guess a mod came in a changed it, apparently this has mild nudity. From Teen to Mature is not a big deal though. People have different ideas on what nudity is I guess. The little section on rating the art needs to be improved, or better represented. The same for the Flash portal too.
Once again great job, youre really good at this style, but I think the boobs could be a little bit BIGGER next time please ;D just kiddin my friend, flawless victory!
Author's Response:
Thanks lol. All joking aside, this is probably as big as it gets with me. I'm not fond of drawing super ginormous breasts. So yeah, anyone else reading this, take note of this >_>;
Another great job will done. I like your style!!!!! keep up that great work!!
\o/ :)
Author's Response:
Thanks ^^
how is this teen?
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how is it not?
You draw very well.Zancoth:WHAT YOUR PROBLEM WITH BOOBS MAN?
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thanks
THEY ARE TOO BIG
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yeah.. what a shame.. :( oh well... /sarcasm
Me likes very much! Me want look more, but that is bad. Me good person! Me no go your page... many bad pictures..
P-please, no make go back?
5/5
and yes, I wrote like that just for the fun of it :) hope you guys understand xD
Author's Response:
me understand :)
Present me this girl IRL and I'll quit everything.
Just kiddin' ^^
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^_^;
I like the other one better.
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thanks
are you tring to make me pop a boner?
Author's Response:
nah.. maybe a little.
I love your style, keep it up. Very well done.
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Thanks
I love your style, its very good
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Thanks
Awsome Job!!!This Is Gonna Be 10/10
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Thanks ^^
you did really good man, this goes into my elite faves, and not becuase of the girl but the drawing, which i mean as a compliment. dont listen to DN83, he low rated a submission because it was mature but it was rated right. you have serious skillz man, i hope you keep drawing!
Author's Response:
Thanks! This indeed was rated correctly. There are some missing shadows on this I want to fix.
cannot be improved upon just keep doing what you doing and dont listen to jolowi he apparently doesnt know much about tits
Author's Response:
Thanks lol
im not saying this to be mean, im just maybe giving you a tip for the next time. but il still put 10 because its awesome!!
ok so the tip is : the tits, i know it sounds weird but look at them. they go down a bit too much, but forget that! its amazing! nice drawing! :) :) :)
-jolowi
Author's Response:
thanks I'll keep that in mind. I think I'm going to make a few adjustments to this picture all around though.
This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo well done! How do you get each line so precise and smooth yet sharp and crisp?? Did you draw this on large paper then scan it or on a 8 by 11 piece of paper or did you use one of those fancy pants, uber expensive but o so impressive tablets?
Author's Response:
I recorded this drawing! I guess I'll finish up editing the raw files tonight and upload it. The you can just see it O_O!
Yeah I used a tablet, but not a too expensive one.
He does the same to my girl drawings.
This is awsome you have to teach me how to color and shade like this.
Author's Response:
thanks yeah.. he's pretty annoying but meh.
I had started photoshop tutorial vids but then people started whining.
Yo props to vortex. I love this pic. Kinda nice...kinda cool....OK ITS FUGGING HAWT >< Keep up the good work ;) Also, for any humanoid specie that got a hold of the chest full of H8TERADE....PLS READ NOTE THE TITLE BEFORE PROCEDING...THANK YOU
Author's Response:
thanks XD
Why on earth did this get in the "T" section of the art portal? I give zero because honestly you can do better topics. Great style, just go in another direction.
Author's Response:
What are you like 9 y/o? The real question is.. Why on earth are you so retarded? If you don't like what I do quit coming to my page maybe? I draw what I enjoy drawing, period. Why would you even give a score or leave a review if you aren't going to base it on the quality of the picture? that's what the review and score are for, not personal comments about unrelated stuff, just stop leaving comments, ffs you cant even give low scores correctly.. take notes from GlassBomb down there at the bottom.
looks almost 3D, very good
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I think Riley is like 9001 times hotter then Maiko
Brunettes FTW!
BTW: ur Power of 3 teams Stinks t(-.-)
Author's Response:
I have chars yet to be revealed that are hotter that them both @_@.
Good guess but indeed that is Nari, I have yet to reveal anything with her yet. Shes not in the umichan story tho.
BTW: STFU! T_T;
The detail is just fantastic. Her curels look like chocolate XD
Author's Response:
chocolate XD ok, now I need to revisit this picture.
this has to be one of the best drawn / coloured and shaded girls iv seen you do... everything looks right and is the right shape size and angle... the colours work perfectly and the shading just tops the triple layered cake!... but for me the hair has got the be one of the things that truely makes it... that amount of care is overwhelming!... i really like the window shadow as well... gives it that added depth... 15/10!... :3
Author's Response:
Thanks! Sometimes I look at it and think the hand should be in front of the hair.
ill give it a fair review :)
its very good. amazingly realistic looking. Excellent lighting. But her left forearm and hand just seem too damn small, and the hand is in an awkward position to boot. My favorite part of this picture is the curls in her hair, theyre just so nice and fluffy looking.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the fair review. I redrew that hand many times but never got it just perfect. I recorded the whole process (well most of it). I still haven't posted it anywhere yet tho, will do soon.
looks almost 3d, very nice. keep up the good worm, I hope you have others like this
Author's Response:
thanks more on the way
A great contribution to the Art Portal.
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Thanks
ANIME NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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voting based on personal taste? lame.
