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Al Vuelo
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Soaring over a sandstorm.
Al Vuelo translates to "Flying", in Spanish.
I don't like the composition. The "camera" is zoomed so far out as if the focus of the drawing is the landscape, but you put half as much effort in the landscape that you put into the tiny figure. The end result looks like a jumbled landscape with a person who doesn't feel like they belong in it.
Sorry for the harsh words. I do feel that they would be excellent separately, and everything else about it is good. Just try to keep to one style, like if you created the landscape fast and loosely and kept the shadows ambiguous, do the same thing for the flying dude.
Voinaimir responds:
That's a solid observation - the figure was actually remarkably slapdash, while most of the time on this piece was spent on the clouds.
Still - I see what you're saying, and thanks for the review!
i like the concept.
reminds me of when i was still alive and used to fly over deserts.
good work
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