Different
Well this was different I like it love this drawing and you gave it a strange and random hole in her back but it was nice I like the drawing here love the shades and such very good detail she does seem to lack emotion in her face so that's another area to work on for her and of course adding some color would be a huge plus here those are just some ideas to think about but anyways nice work here nice drawing
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color some emotion in face etc
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