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Mary Stark

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I like this character and the background but the scenario given and the character put there don't seem to fit at all. First of all, the character has a feel as if it was placed randomly on the background. with the light coming from an explosion the character should have much more dramatic lighting with very high contrast between the shadows and the highlights. the highlight on the hair seems very much off. the glove rocket being off makes it even more awkward and in an occasion in wich we can see somebody's whole body they cant be close enough to make such of a distortion between the eyes, if one eye is twice as big as the other one that means that it is also twice as far away from it.
I'm not just saying it to diss on your work. In fact, I think each of these, The background and the character are awesome on their own but I fell like the piece as a whole right now is kinda bringing them both down.

upatrono responds:

Thx mate for detailed review. I do find it rather helpful. In fact I do agree that lightning factor is not as well managed as it should be.

The segments of the armor look really nice!

upatrono responds:

thx mate ^_^

So cool I have always wanted to see a female iron man!

upatrono responds:

Thx mate :)

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Sep 12, 2015
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