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- 3,239
- Score
- 3.93 / 5.00
- Date
- 04/10/2012
- Category
- Other
- File Info
- 1271 x 1960 px
- JPEG
- 653.7 kb
- Tags
- apocalypse
- gwar
- 2013
- daygloayhole
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Author Comments
YAY, new comic. This one's a little different, starts off slow. Oh wells, hope ya'll digs.
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Reviews
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Apr 10, 2012
This is a good beginning for a web comic. It shows a well developed character in only a few lines. This is also well designed too. The only problem with it was a small error that I seen and that was when your main character said, "he left mom an me..." and you didn't put a mark after an which should look like this an' making it the word and. Unless you meant it to be that way. Anyway it looks like it will be a great comic.
good call on the punctuation, bad enough I use crazy phonetic spelling I have to have bad punctuation as well. Thx for the props too!