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Score
4.38 / 5.00

Date
06/18/2009
Category
Illustration
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800 x 945 px
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196.5 kb
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color
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Some mech and a scout on patrol.

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RoachCommanderRoachCommander

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Jul 21, 2010

Just one thing.

I really love your style, in fact I place it in my top 10 for sure.

My only issue is her rifle. Assuming she's a soldier, her rifle is her most important asset, her best friend, her life. Without it, she is nothing. With this in mind, the way she's holding her rifle, becomes strange; like a toy and not her best friend. (The apparent lack of weight to the rifle doesn't help).

I do see though, that she seems to be pointing something out to the Mech, so a simple fix ( to keep this pose) would be a shoulder strap with no slack on the rifle to her shoulder.

Sorry for being so nit picky, and i hope this helps.

Like i said though, overall I like this piece of work. So much, if I had reason right now, I'd commission you. =)

P.S. I also recognize the one year age of this, so I apologize if this is irrelevant information.


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0v3rd0s30v3rd0s3

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars Jul 18, 2010

Redhead!

She's a redhead!
Apart from that, I like how you did it. I mean, how the colors came out and the playin' of shadows (If there are shadows).
Just one thing I cannot understand [I'm not bright :( ]: How does the mech (It looks like made of rock!) moves? Does it has a propulsor?



DN83DN83

Rated 5 / 5 stars Jun 25, 2009

Like a cool manga cover.

It feels like "Applessed" mixed with Final Fantasy cuteness.



LymphoCiteTLymphoCiteT

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Jun 19, 2009

that's it

it's really noble drawing for art portal, but why 17+?
i can show it to my little brother without any reflections :/


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xiodosxiodos

Rated 5 / 5 stars Jun 18, 2009

background and awesome

seriously just add some rocky mountains or something :]


TPSDude responds:

I get your point, but I generally just draw characters first, then draw a completely different image with said characters in said background. However doing it all in pencil, then crosshatching with ruler like efficiencey, and then going over with markers takes a long ass time, time that I don't have whilst in school, meeting my required student artwork, working, and gaming. Thanks for the 10!