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Author's Comments
The first drawing that I've actually finished in Photoshop. This was made with a mouse.
Constructive criticism is much appreciated. I hope to get better with the help of your feedback.
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 9.0 / 10
pretty impressive for a mouse.i love the lighting effects and the hints of detail in the spartans armor. the orange/yellow tint on his visor is perfect. other than that the proportions are a lil off, but hey, if it was too perfect it would just be boring ;)
cant wait to see more
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I won't be drawing Halo for a while, but I'll come back to it eventually.
Well you've certainly earned yourself a 9/10. But is it just me or his right arm seems a bit off? The neck seems a tad too big or it might be the helmet that is a tad too small. Other than that, Excellent work.
Just out of curiosity, which version of photoshop did you use?
Author's Response:
I believe the version I've used it CS2.
Thanks for the review.
not perfect, the chiefs neck is too long, heads to small, arms are a bit off, but considering you drew with a mouse and it still came out this wondeful, i'm amazed and amazing lighting by the way, do make more.
Author's Response:
Thanks. And yeah, I'll make a ton more.
You made that with a mouse in photoshop, I draw doing the same thing but my drawings are crap XD
but yeah, its awesome man and keep on making more epic stuff like this
Author's Response:
Thanks, and yeah drawing with a mouse is a pain. I have respect for those who can make drawings far better than this with a mouse.
Halo is one of my favorite fps games really an epic game.
Author's Response:
I guess I like Halo as well. Thanks for the ten.
Hey i love the whole halo saga and this is what there should be more of consept art for the spartans ect. but the blur effect what you gave it tops it off with the halo olive drab great work tommy-gun
Author's Response:
Thanks, and also there's a lot of Halo fan-art like this around the web. I suggest going to deviant art or something like that, which should help you find halo art.
As for me, I'll be coming back to drawing Halo stuff in the future when I am better, so you might want to keep an eye on me as well.
i like halo
Author's Response:
Cool.
love everything shader and texture wise with your work
but proportion is lacking heavy
you really need to work on things like head size
your work is doos though
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Your shading is spot on, and your textures very realistic. Minor issue with the helmet, as it seems as the cover over the visor seems rather raised when it shouldn't be, and the top of his head is a lil high. Also the rifle butt should be against his shoulder for more of a combat ready look. A final note, maybe you could make the blur to your advantage, and make an illustration with lots of movement in it like hes running or something? Just a suggestion. In all, I double g digg this drawing, great job!
~Jake P.S. - Sorry for the wall o text lol
Author's Response:
Wall of text? Not at all.
Thanks for the advice and criticizm.
I wish I could draw like this >.<
I agree about the blur tho :S
Author's Response:
Thanks man.
I agree with Fleshlight. It does look like he is moving fast with the blur and everything, but other than that it is pretty good.
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Fantastic detail, it's almost surreal the way you've recreated this.
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Thanks for the review.
I remember seeing this in the art forum, but it was a WIP then. Seemed like it was heading to the right direction, but I really don't like the blur you added. It implies that he's moving fast, but his pose contradicts that.
Author's Response:
Thank you.