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C.O.W: Abdominal Snowman

The Abdominal Snowman

Far beneath the snow, a ferocious snow creature waits. With the ability to melt into the ground itself this predator is a master of camouflage. An Icicle used as not only a weapon but as a sensor for the ground above he can see all who can not see him. One step too far and he will strike! penetrating your cold skin with his sharp icicle and bring you back underground with him. Meals are quick as the mouth is attached to the abdomen not too far from the stomach causing immediate churning in stomach acid as soon as you enter his mouth.

C.O.W Entry for the theme: Arctic Terror

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Kashi

2010-12-08 19:58:36

Welp...

Although the character design is pretty good, the background is lacking terribly. I think you can spend some more time on it and make it just as cool as the creature. Maybe removing the pencil lines behind it (or what looks like them) would be an improvement.
Also, I can't help but think this is more suited for CHoW, AKA Character of the Week. The abominal snowman looks like a man with no head and cut off at the knees, with a lot of fur. You can see the defined biceps nd clear shpe of the torso. As stated in the CoW rules, the creature it not supposed to bear any human resemblance.
Rules aside, the actual creature looks cool. You did a swell job on the fur and the face has a great expression. Keep it up.

Toast-Tony responds:

Thanks kakashi, i know i have a lot to work on when it comes to backgrounds, i might go back to it and improve on it then re submit, i know it's based on a human body, Turkeyonastick let me off with this, i know i was pushing the boat out a bit. Thanks a lot for the advice dude :)