Nice

Well the comic style looks good and like all the frames very sharp edges showcasing all the details of the comic really nice work so nice efforts here

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incest! incest! is the best! but your sister to the test!

* Honk Honk *

Oopsy Daisy, I think I just spoiled the ending. OH FUCK IT.

cool

HOLY SHIT SHES A GUNDAM

Ryuko's hair in the upper part looks a bit off, flat somehow, and the other girl (can't remember names argh) has rather uncharacteristic eyes, especially in that lower close-up. Them details, this aint like you Shadman! :P But apart from that minor stuff, it looks great.

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