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Whoa this was great stuff. You really figured out how to flow from one comic to the next in terms of your story. I love the way she expresses the situation so subttly but we all know her ass just got licked real deep and made her all sorts of crazy embarrassed but she plays it off well. I love how her friands legs drop off into one panel. That was a good setting and it was very original. Your text interactions were good for your attention and the main issues were addressed well. I enjoyed it and you have talent when you do full comics like this. I found myself lost in the story. Your colors are good and the main girl matches well with her friend. She seems a bit more edgy and punk but she is just as well drawn as the main girl. I wouldnt really change this one. You have a great piece of art here and the story flows well from frame to frame and each panel has a unique way of displaying the conversation and setting. I find the mood is well established too as you have a city background with roses and candle dinner so you understand this is an important date and why she was not to be late to it. Little did she know there was another person there on their date. I do also like how bloo is being sat on in a way and his facial right before and when it happens was really good work. A good submission and something I will remember today as it was funny and original even if you used characters from a kids cartoon you made it your own and I hope to see more soon.
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Nothing to add change or say with this part but you have talent and I love how you do your comic panels.
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