Author
TheRealShadman
Date Submitted
09/07/2009 | 04:00PM EST
Category & Size
Illustration | 1024 x 1654 px
Tags
Current Score
4.57 / 5.00
327 votes | 15,508 views
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Awards
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Daily 3rd Place –
09/08/2009
Author's Comments
A Picture I have painted on a A2 paper wiht ecoline color ink.
I got inspired by the whole girls-building-robots thing by a picture I saw by the badass "rtil" (http://www.newgrounds.co m/art/view/rtil/robot-rep air-service) go check it out! ;)
Constructive Critism is always welcome.
I strongly recommend the fullview.
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 9.8 / 10
Just awesome, man, detail, activity, talent, this one has it all. 10 all the way.
Author's Response:
Yay thanks man.
Dude are you Fucking SERIOUS? There was so much Detail I thouhg my head was going to explode! Wow.
You EARND a 10 Defo!
their 100% angels :P
Author's Response:
Well maybe just 76 % :)
There is no other way to describe it but awesome.
can I date one of this girlS?? lool'OO'lool. this ONE is hot. and i mean it. I also agree with "Hiwow" optimus prime is soooo lucky. The texture is good.
KEEEEP GOING, GGGIIRRRRRLLLSSS
Author's Response:
XD Thanks man!
Hot babes building a well oiled death machine.
Testosterone!
Author's Response:
Haha! Thank a lot my friend!
How Optimus Prime was made. like how you use the crosshair design to shade in parts of your pircture
hot babes and a badass robot... what a combo :3
Author's Response:
;D thanks for the high score.
CAN SOME1 EXPLAIN ZIS!?!
I only come to the ones with tits... strange...
Author's Response:
mysterious...
Yoy do a great job at incorperating the individual elements of your style in to this work. Also complexity and accuracy of your work in terms of proportion is very good. What media do you work with?
Author's Response:
Well thanks alot for the comment and the awesome score, on this piece I have worked with ecoline color ink and a brush. (no computer those are traditional medias)
It is a simple concept nothing left to say. I will say good I like the coloring and the overall idea. Your man's man artist.
Author's Response:
Haha XD thanks alot.
i hope thoses r da angels i see in heaven! :D
love your style, love the amount of detail you use, love those sexy girls (btw is that optimus prime they're building there?)
Author's Response:
It has been asked before, because of the similar face mask thing, but no It wasnt meant to be optimus. Thanks alot for the review.
I love the darn thing. I'm not much of an artist so I can't give you a technical critique, but I can say what i like to see. There is a lot of stuff going on here, but for me, that makes it fun to look at for a while. I like the attention to detail you took, especially when putting things like scratches on the welders.
The style really reminds me of Otomo. You know... Akira? You know if he was a pervert and stuff. But i loved it.
Author's Response:
I have never seen Akira but I suppose I should one day, thanks alot for the nice review man!
girls and mechs!!! your art is just to great sir
Author's Response:
Dude its great hearing of you again, thanks alot for the nice review, highly appreciated.
theres to much clashing going on... even in full screen mode its very busy... so lets start from top to bottom... the background isnt the main focus i know but its very hard to pick out the details that are there... take the bridge/cranes/structure... you seem to high light bits... but leave other bits out... moving down... i feel a bit more *bleach?* could have been used or lighter shades/ reflections and carry that colour onto the girl and head of the robot... that bright orange/yellow.white spark should be more powerfull on the arms and head... also the shading is wrong on the arm as it is facing the other way... *your light source is the light.... just her arm says its coming from above her*
now all that metal work / tubes/plumming and wires... its very black/grey/white and seems far to much for the picture in my eyes... but i like it, very well done...
the bit i love is the colours on the robots arm from the sparks, its not the perfect example of spot lighting... but its 200% better then the one on the right which is just brighter... like the thought gone into the girls as they are really *hardcore* as in they have cuts and tattoes from working in the heat of the machinery... also im not going to bother with the lack of clothes... you just want to protect the eyes and face :P... i feel the posion of some of the girls is akward and rather unrealistic... take the girl with one hand on the rope... she wouldnt be able to weld like that beacuse she would spin in a direction... either put her leg up agaisnt something or use the other hand to suport her from the arm... a small spillage of bleach in the bottom right looks cool even if it was an acident...
i like the style but try to keep a bit of realism in it seen as that is what i feel your slightly going for... this is a fantastic piece of work and shows use of multiple styles, artistic tools and knowledge... love how the body of the robot can be seen behind the metal mesh as well... but like i said to start with... *choas*.... there is a lot going on and alot to take in... so unless you were to stand back and admire this work of art, you wouldnt be able to realise all the things and hidden details that you would at first glance as many users would just pass through...
so in a nutshell... 1) more realistic 2) better spot lighting 3) better use of colours and shading
i know this is done on paper so its hard to fix stuff... so just keep them pointers for future things... hope to see more lovely work from you in the future...
- LegolaSS Ciao
Author's Response:
Wow, realism strikes this picture down! This is one hell of a helpful review, I cannot thank you enough for taking youre time and look at it critically. Youre tipps really made me think and I will keep them in mind for the future. Thanks alot for the high score and the review that makes me speechless.
You also seem to understand the details I put in and I highly appreciate that.
- People like you make the internet a better place!
If so that's even greater. Excellent detail my friend.
Author's Response:
Not exactly :D Thankyou for the review.
And Artist Of Course.
Nice Work
Author's Response:
Thanks alot my friend you are too kind!
Love the detail with the robot and wiring. The only thing that would never happen is that dress code for a robot building site
Author's Response:
Hm yeah that dresscode would probably be to dangerous XD youre right about that. Thanks alot for the review!
Euphoric! Heavenly even!
The shading is just not that brilliant. You should work more on that. Other than taht it looks great.
Author's Response:
Yeah youre right about the shading, thanks alot man!
I like how ya drew seemingly thousands of wires on that guy,the backround is also awesome,really cool :D
Im always glad to see such a large formatted fully covered and colored traditional work. All these details want to be explored. I go on to a longer full view session now :)
Author's Response:
Im Thankful that there are still people who like to see traditional work, thanks alot for the review lad!
this picture is very impressive, I love the detailed.
:D 5/5
Author's Response:
Thanks alot for the great score lad! Much appreciated.
