Nice

Wow I have to say that this was really nice work here on this one it has some nice deep red colors here on this piece very nice work on this I think some added reds and texture would have topped it off but as for the sketch itself it is pretty good in itself I do like the work here on this one and hope you make much more like this in the future anyway keep it real

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More reds and some added texture

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Pretty decent

While not one of your better works, it does have some appeal to it. I keep thinking it's meant to represent one of the characters in the "Madness Combat" series. You get that way when you just hear "Madness" all the time being referred to that. It was nice with the red background, even if it was not the most detailed. The coolest part is probably the cord that's sticking into the person's chest. It's like his or her heart is being ripped out in some way.

Blood vessels on eyes are always an interesting effect to use. It looks like this comic has an interesting plot going for it. There seem to be these little balloons or something around his neck. Speaking of necks, the long neck really gives out a good effect of dementedness. It's also nice how you twist the words around, literally.