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Aug 19, 2009 | 8:01 PM EDT
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the 4th page of my not yet finished comic book.

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DragonPunchDragonPunch

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good

The background is missing! EEEK!!!

Great character art though!


TheOmiyan responds:

I got a 9. . . awesome!


FlamenearHydrogenFlamenearHydrogen

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Feels empty

Try adding simple backgrounds if it wouldn't be too much trouble. Also dialog could use some work.



HoboweaselHoboweasel

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

hmmm....

Well it's pretty well done, the proportion's fairly accurate (assuming they're kids)... The placement of the eyes and such seems a bit off... especially the kid in the first scene, his facial features make it look like you were attempting a realistic rendition, not manga. It's still pretty good, but keep drawing, and use human analogs, you'll draw even better...
As for the dialogue... it's not that interesting or comprehensive... xc But I score mainly on the art...



aba1aba1

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

hmmm not bad

but ur missing the girls back hair its really large so u should be able to see it n u lack any background so there standing in a random white nothingness god shading tho but try n do a lil transistion even if its just a lil when doing the full on blacck ohhh n not bad dialog its more natural than most noob comics


TheOmiyan responds:

This page is'nt actualy done it obviously needs some fixing up, but thanks for being honest