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Fantastic work!
Do you actually have a story line, and common characters that you aways draw.
Like a comic book that you have made?
Well... Good work anyway.
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The 3/20 pages of my comic book 17 more to go
TheOmiyan responds:
YES i do have common character his name is Motokai. . . JUST SO happens his name is a jewish name, it's odd to me.
Gooooddd....
This page is pretty good as well! When I was your age I drew a lot of my panels this way too. You should try doing panel in panel action to kind put some more pop in pages. That book I suggested the last time would really benefit you I believe. Also, I think a lot of modern day comics have at least 24 pages of story in them so it may also benefit you to go a little past 20 pages. It'll give you more space to flesh out your story. I say that because your panels are pretty good and that's good for puttin a lot of detail in the art but hopefully, if you decide you to stay at 20 pages, it won't condense your story too much. I hope that helps. A 9 for your efforts then my man!!
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nice page... plz check out my work and scout!! = )
TheOmiyan responds:
maybe i will
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