Fancy colors. Like the person below said it does seem flat, there's a theme that runs through all your art which is that every character you draw looks like a standalone figure (kinda like an amiibo) and that becomes very apparent when you put a bunch of character together like this. There doesn't seem to be a focused light source, and they're all standing at the same 3/4 angle which takes the life out of them a bit.

Challenge yourself to do more unorthodox perspectives. Draw a character from the back occasionally, or the side, top or bottom. I will come in handy down the road.

For people who don't know what Indivisible is, it is basically Valkyrie Profile... to which I say YES!

The art is colorful and good but seems a bit flat.

Indivisible only has a short demo-prototype and nothing else but people are going crazy about it. to me it just look like any ordinary platformer rpg. I dont see anything special to it. its like the hype before X or Y game is even made and now people are sad and angry because it sucks... hype this one too much and I garantee you're going to regret it.

but bleh, My only issue with this drawing is that it looks like a clusterfuck at first.
annnnd... that chinese-looking thing on the left? whose arm is it that's grabbing her hair? i'm a bit confused.

Absolutely love it! All the characters are drawn great.

Looks pretty great man, but if I were to criticize anything it'd be that you missed some spots with the coloring. Like clicking on the image reveals little spots in corners and near points if you know what I mean. Otherwise it's pretty darn sweet!