Pretty good...
Very good, actually. All I have to say is that his nose seems a little large in panel 3. Mayb it's just me, but it looks big.
here's the third page. A bit confusing with the sequential path on the panels, so I numbered the panels to follow them accordingly. Numbering them saves me the trouble of reconfiguring the panels which is a real pain, so I hope this still makes it easy to read. If I miss anything, adjustments, tweaks, let me know. No major adjustments will be made, I'll do touch ups by comment so feel free to comment.
Pretty good...
Very good, actually. All I have to say is that his nose seems a little large in panel 3. Mayb it's just me, but it looks big.
haha The character does have a big nose, just the way its intended to be. Thanks for the comment!
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