Author
Zachary (Techno)
Date Submitted
10/09/2009 | 03:32PM EST
Category & Size
Illustration | 720 x 405 px
Tags
dad | techno | sunlight | newgrounds
Current Score
2.70 / 5.00
145 votes | 2,230 views
Author's Comments
I think this is the best piece i have created yet...
A menu piece for an upcoming game
The People Have Spoken
Average Score: 8.8 / 10
pretty daRN GOOD SHADING! =p GOOD ANATOMY TOO :)
MUSCLES...TOO...BIG...CAN'T...REACH...FACE...lol great work.
Its a very nice tribute, and everyone loves dad! 10/10
think it's awesome
Its good....but something is missing......im not really sure what it is...
I love the effort you put into this, however, I suggest studying the anatomy of the human body for a bit. His Traps (shoulder/neck muscles) are a little flat, you have to take the size of his arms into consideration when your doing his head and neck. But all n' all it's not that bad for a Drawing of Dad.
And with that said I give you a Satisfactory score of 7.
-Keep going at it, Soenaz
You kinda got the shading wrong. But what you should do it but more details. More it more Vector Style.
His chest needs to be bigger to fit with his arms, or his arms need to be smaller. It seems in-proportionate. I think the detail was most accurate and looked the best on his face and neck area, some of his stomach and chest muscles look a tiny bit whack. It's overall a very nice picture and the background color compliments the purple on Dad.
blcoked
Author's Response:
loldavidzx
I love this, very nice detail! The shading is nice, and all the lines showing his muscles and depth in his body look awesome. His arms, sort of look like they are behind him yet in front of him, but it doesn't affect the terrific art you made here. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response:
why thank you kind sir
I agree with the person below... It has GREAT detail and you probably put lots of effort into it, But he IS to big and he has too much muscle.
Author's Response:
how can you tell me he is too big? HE CAN NEVER BE TOO BIG
But I feel that Dad is a little to muscular in this picture, especially in the neck and bicep region. However, there is a lot of detail in the muscles. I also like the detail put into the mask. All in all I think you deserve a 9/10
In all honesty, it could have been a lot better.
I see what you were trying to go for, and with a little more practice I think you can do it, you just gotta work on some things. I will give you a 7 nonetheless.
Author's Response:
Wow cool review, thank you for telling me WHAT i actually need to improve on...NOT