Based on the art:
Nice art, I really like the shading you do. It looks pretty good.
Although I can tell you flipped the screen upside down for Ivan's screen. I know you did it to make the danger seem more imminent, (at least I think that's why), but it pulled me out a little, which brings me to
Based on the story:
Not much happened other than the establishment of a threat, as well as the security system that Swami has, that Swami is actually a pretty freakin' awesome programmer. Okay, so a good amount.
Pretty Good.