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Being shot and/or stabbed is standard procedure for the Scrapper crew.

Delura Comics List (Newgrounds): http://www.newgrounds.com/playlists/view/b1d837843679370ebbc70ae84912791b

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Love it

Wow i have to say such sharp color very well designed the luminating lines are nice and that color just jumps out at you very unique indeed

~X~

A comic! At a first glance I was thinking this was a promo for something to come. The pace is great, everything is just full of action, but as a single page there's not much to tell what's going on. I'd better read the whole thing. Keep up the good work!

-cd-

By far and large this is only one of two comics in this comic series in which a question mark appears above my head and will never be replaced with a face-palm. This will confuse me and never will I have an intermediate or direct answer without numerous additional screens added or without a commentary from the comic's creator(s). Hopefully this flaw doesn't pop up a third time. Confusion that cannot by answered from the viewers'(readers') side of things is not beneficial to a story, unless a story later explains what the heck happened, and then it only reduces the damage done to the story.

Tanadrine-Studios responds:

Looks like I'm going to have to do my research on putting action panels together based on the responses so far. I greatly appreciate the honest feedback and I'm going to work to get it right.

It is very confusing, although points for being visually striking.
For those who can't figure it out.
1) Tank thing poses dramatically. DUN DUN!
2) Tank thing fires. Makes a FWOOSH noise.
3) Shots rip through Dodger, spilling his black blood. Evil to the core.
4) Holy cow, Dodger's...dodging... the shots. while still hurt...
5) Dodger is... THE FLASH!
6) Tank thing is... THE FLASH! (It likes to move it move it.)
7) OH noes... IVAN! Run IVAN! RUN!!! It's shooting at him through the wall!
8) *GASP* IVAN'S HIT! OH NooOOooOOooOOooOO!

All together, it's very distinct. I kinda like it though, although, yeah, takes a bit to piece it together.

I have to agree. Up until now (yes I've been keeping track, nice series :) ) has been well designed and made sense. This series of panels is incredibly confusing. I've looked at it multiple times and I can't for the life of me figure out what is happening.

Tanadrine-Studios responds:

Thanks for the input; this is the kind of criticism I need to know where I need to improve!

I'll see if looking up sample comic pages from experienced authors that are character-action centric (IE: Moving the story forward without dialogue). I need to get the panel/imagery slip-ups turned around.

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