if only her right hand was complete

I really think everything about this is nice. The soft colors and the lighting are excellent. Overall great skill indeed. :D

The rendering looks neat and refined. It has a clean look to it and is well blended, with a soft pallet of colors that makes this as a whole very comfortable to look at. Everything from the head to the shoulders looks perfect. My only concerns are with the anatomy below. The waist for instance needs a more natural shape; it curves too tightly inwards, making it hard to decipher where the ribcage ends and the stomach area begins. The perspective on the right leg (her left) is off making the figure look unbalanced. All I can suggest for that is look at a photo reference. 'And of course, as you probably already know, one of her hands merges/disappears into her leg. The shading and lighting is very crisp, but too gentle and too dispersed. Don't be so shy even when using such a pale color pallet, and push that contrast further. Adding stronger definition to the figure will do a lot in making it more interesting to the viewer. It's a nice image overall and beautiful to look at.

Very nice look. the hair swept to one side definitely helps to balance the characters look. I see what Plasmarift is talking about with the grey hair though i feel it is probably a fur attached to the pad. Over all good smooth quality work. Rock on \m/(^_^)\m/

A very interesting piece of art. Much better than anything I've drawn. The eye with the red iris is kind of creepy. Those eyes remind me of the girl from Devil May Cry 3. I have a few questions:

What's that grey hair coming off of her blue shoulder pad?
She has four bubbles on her stomach area. Are those suppose to be her abs?
What is an OC (I know this one is a stupid question, but I honestly don't know exactly)?

Still, a good piece.

I also wanted to congratulate you on being scouted and accepted into the Art Portal. I think of it as an honor. Don't forget about others who were in your previous position before though. Any ambitious person deserves to have their art looked at. Good luck!