Nice
I am loving that you added some red in here almost feels like you could have added even more red like a frame or border, So nice design here on this sketch allthough no or little color I could see you adding some color to bring out the design more but overall this was just pretty well done work you have here, hope to see much more from you and great sketch you have here its a fantastic piece.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
almost feels like you could have added even more red like a frame or border
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