Sysica
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A nude picture of my character Sysica Olivinia
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Rated 5 / 5 stars 1 month ago
It is so perfect! 5/5
Rated 5 / 5 stars Apr 11, 2011
hmm...
I see the name of the art is the same as your username.You wouldn't have happened to draw...yourself?
Rated 5 / 5 stars Jan 29, 2011
GREAT!!!
Nice hentai
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars Jan 11, 2011
It's a POSE
How the SHIT can you steal a pose!? If I pose like that will they come and sue my ass? Will you call me a thief if I tried to draw that pose1?
It's a pose, it's something you do with your body. Stolen porn? Hahah, that's funny seeing that everyone learns from each-other since there's no porn drawing school. It's basically made up of dick bouncing angles.
Anyways dude, here's my criticism;
The breasts are placed too high on the body. More or less the masses we call breasts are lumps on the chest that stretch with the movements of the shoulders. So they should be stretching a little bit too. Also keep in mind that breasts aren't always round like circles, they can be like squares and ovals when given the right circumstance.
Lips are placed too low on the face.
As hair descends away from the head it usually gets thinned out unless it's a good fresh cut or in the picture from the pose you used the hair is actually given depth.
Regardless I don't think you should have copied the bellybutton, it's the second most irritating part of this piece(the breasts was the most irritating)
But you've got the arms down alright cept by the pits(breasts faults again)
Just a little bit of an idea here for you. Next time you use a pose, instead of copying some of the key features, box out the figure on your paper so that it resembles the pose and then do your character with the features your character has instead of the characteristics of the pose you're doing.
It's a good practice, I still do it but on more of an extreme level( looking at the picture I'm going to try to carbon copy for 30~60 seconds and then waiting 1 minute before drawing everything I remember as much as I can)
In any case, you just gotta find something to study, challenge yourself, to get better.
Oh! Hey, here's a good practice for someone of your level. Life Drawing, it never gets old.
http://www.posemaniacs.com/
The 30 second drawing, or the Random pose viewer links on the side work great for practice.
I'm going to go look at your more recent art, I do understand that this is old.
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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars Nov 9, 2010
Nice
It's not stolen you guys, it's been redone. It's pretty different from the original.
I think you did a decent job on this, although the original looks better if you ask me. The wink was a good idea, but I think the hair doesn't look quite as real as I would expect it to. The shading was done very well and I think overall you did a fantastic re-creation of the original. Keep up the good work!