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3.00 / 5.00

Date
03/21/2011
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alien
evil
good
gods

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ChieftxChieftx

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars Mar 21, 2011

to reiterate what JakBaronKing said...

it doesn't really need more detail, but it needs more visual interest. I mean suppose someone comes along, sees your art for the first time, what are they gonna get from it? there's three abstract figures with some symbols. they look kinda alien but they don't really give off a godlike aura, just aliens. some really dramatic value would help bring this out but even then what are god of anyway? theres not really many visual cues that would imply thier meanig, I mean the good guy (I assume) holds a bird which I guess shows his gentle nature but evil has a, black ball? wat?

the anatomy isn't as bad as he said though, your male forms definitely need more work though especially the middle guy, he looks likes he's just standing in line at the DMV, what is he supposed to be anyway?

I agree that these characters look static and boring though, thats I think the gist of what that guy is saying. they are aliens not robots, give them more life.
hope that helps.


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awsomehighvoltageawsomehighvoltage

Rated 5 / 5 stars Mar 21, 2011

good

great art, but one question, how does the middle one eat? or is it a robot of some type?



JakBaronKingJakBaronKing

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars Mar 21, 2011

Too simple

Needs more details and such.

Not worthy of presentation....yet.

See if you can apply more anatomically sound bodies for these aliens.

Make them look convincing. Add skin texture, shading, etc.

Make them come alive before me.

....

However...if this is intended for a Flash cartoon then it is justified.


SYRSA responds:

You just don't know the way of art, do you?