Date Submitted

06/17/2009 | 09:34PM EST

Category & Size

Illustration | 396 x 358 px

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Explosion Sketch

Rated T
Explosion Sketch
Dim the Lights

Author's Comments

Another sketch I made on flash. Just a basic explosion, nothing too particular here. Positive or negative feedback is appreciated, I'll respond to all reviews!

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Average Score: 5.3 / 10

Score: 4
Cantdoright

"I see..."

date: June 20, 2009

As said before examples of the real thing help alot. Straight lines appear often in your work and gives the feeling that you only use the line tool. I also do not understand the yellow star... is that where the bomb hit? Also the most importent thing that I grade down on is no background, even simple backgrounds will do, but not just black. Backgrounds can make any piece of artwork better. Don't give up and keep drawing.

July 19, 2009

Author's Response:

The yellow star was intended to be where the bomb hit, but the help on the straight lines is appreciated, it makes a lot more sense now. Thanks.

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Score: 2
Psi43

"study that stuff a little more"

by: Psi43
date: June 18, 2009

You should try to study explosions a little more. This looks more like something that would come out of a firework. Theuse of colors isn't really good either, they're too bright. Maybe also, instead of making a cartoony cotton ball for smoke, try to use alpha colors to make it look like actual smoke.

June 18, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for the tips and the nice review!

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Score: 10
JKMonkey

"Simplistic yet Vibrant"

date: June 17, 2009

Good job with this one man, really liked it. Though I liked how simplistic it was, very simple, but yet it was very vibrant, well done, and was in great quality. Excellent work

June 17, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks man, I really appreciate your compliments.

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