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4.71 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 17, 2009 | 9:34 PM EDT
File Info
396 x 358 px
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6.3 kb
Tags
flash
sketch
bomb
explosion

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Author Comments

Another sketch I made on flash. Just a basic explosion, nothing too particular here. Positive or negative feedback is appreciated, I'll respond to all reviews!

Reviews


CantdorightCantdoright

Rated 2 / 5 stars

I see...

As said before examples of the real thing help alot. Straight lines appear often in your work and gives the feeling that you only use the line tool. I also do not understand the yellow star... is that where the bomb hit? Also the most importent thing that I grade down on is no background, even simple backgrounds will do, but not just black. Backgrounds can make any piece of artwork better. Don't give up and keep drawing.


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sumidiotdude responds:

The yellow star was intended to be where the bomb hit, but the help on the straight lines is appreciated, it makes a lot more sense now. Thanks.


Psi43Psi43

Rated 1 / 5 stars

study that stuff a little more

You should try to study explosions a little more. This looks more like something that would come out of a firework. Theuse of colors isn't really good either, they're too bright. Maybe also, instead of making a cartoony cotton ball for smoke, try to use alpha colors to make it look like actual smoke.


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sumidiotdude responds:

Thanks for the tips and the nice review!


JKMonkeyJKMonkey

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Simplistic yet Vibrant

Good job with this one man, really liked it. Though I liked how simplistic it was, very simple, but yet it was very vibrant, well done, and was in great quality. Excellent work


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sumidiotdude responds:

Thanks man, I really appreciate your compliments.