What I found to be weird about this is why you even made it a chicken eye. I can imagine a plucked chicken in a slaughterhouse would probably look like this. What's strange is that it probably would have worked just as well if it had been a human eye. At least the flies are very nicely drawn. It really makes you realize how much we can look like plucked chickens. Its flesh is rotting so well.
I can't help but feel you were trying to make some disturbing point with this. Whatever the reason, the result was nice. It's amazing how many colors and shades you can get with so little material. I can't tell if those are welts or drops of blood or whatever. It's a truly insane and disturbing picture.
