Oooh now this looks more detailed then the others, but it could use a little background.
Oooh now this looks more detailed then the others, but it could use a little background.
Hmmmm
Well notbad work here and a nice charchter here good structure even the background was decent now this one does tell a little story even the blood on the stick shows something happened so my suggestion is more blood on ground maybe even the can just an idea though
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a few suggestions with blood and such
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kewl
why did she slice the soda!?!?! I thought they was friends
Love it
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