This is another commission I did for a girl on VAC.
I changed my original design, and made it more simple then added the wolf and feathers.
I think she looks cute.
I like how the wolf came out...and I suck at animals.
Constructive criticism is welcome.
Where's her tail?
Another neat feature is to forget this common ani-human look in anime.
Try the same hair color as her fur...And you know how you can't see the whites of the eye's of a dog (or in this case a wolf). You know how starfire has green eyes with even GREENER pupils?
These are just suggestions to a drawing that is completely different from what you drew.
Some ideas you may or may not want to try.
Other than that...the drawing is cute to say the least.
The wolf is good...
The wolf came out pretty good, but the girl is really a-symetric, the boob on the left is ermm... well... retarded... O.o
the shadow in the shirt looks abit weird and her face is really out of shape, try looking at how other people have done it first next time....
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It doesn't look like an actual woman...
The girl has almost no recognizable female features. Her breasts, aside from being completely disproportionated, have absolutely no depth and those two lines to simulate stretching you made don't help, her face is distorted and looks like a male's, the lines you drew on her shirt are in places without any actual movement to wring them like that.
And use photoshop to make lighting for her hair and shading, goddamn.
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