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Jan 14, 2010 | 9:11 AM EST
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a dolfin and a fish

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JoshsouzaJoshsouza

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Too Simple

I think you should actually take a better quality photo and used something better than lined paper because it is pretty bad plus do you see things like this in the art portal at all? Plus you should put at least a little water background in the middle along withs some color to complete it.

I also think it needs more details in it because it is pretty basic and maybe some shading would help a bit to make it better but you have to fix it at least a little bit because I have to say that it looks like something that took 5 minutes and like a little sketch so maybe fix that and put in a background and you would be fine.

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CoopCoop

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Too sketchy

Sorry, if you're going to draw, you need to stop using lined paper, unless you're doing something like a cunning "childish themed" cartoon, that comes straight out of a schoolchild's exercise book at school. With how these two look, you need to practice more on the work and when you get better, start adding things like colour and backgrounds.

I'm not sure to what end you're taking these, so perhaps detail them some more in the comments section, so we can all see what you're thinking - it's what they put that there for.

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HaggardHaggard

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Bad photo

It's hard to really rate this drawing as the photo is very unsharp. Also the drawing seems to be very basic, only a few lines, no colours, very little details.

The dolphin itself looks good, but as I've said, there are no details present. At least some more lines to indicate the water surface would have been nice, or maybe a sun above the dolphin and the fish.

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RogerBKRogerBK

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Hmmmm...

Hey man, that's not a nice draw...It's well drawn, but it has a bad photo, so, it doesn't show the whole draw...
Sorry guy, your draw is very nice, but the photo fucked up w/ everything...You can make a better job reading some photo tips...
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Roger