Too generic, too futuristic, too soldiery, way too much guyish - 0/10
Now for real, really interesting that you made this piece from a hand-drawn / scanned drawing, the result is awesome.
When I look at this soldier, I think of the future, a ridiculously distant future. Maybe the year 4120? Some time way ahead of our time, when everything looks diferent, maybe not even in this planet, or dimension. Like looking at cave paintings, but inverted. Wondering how the world that being comes from looks like, it's so ALIEN!