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what else could I say, I think the name speaks for it self
I like the character
Looks like a mix poker player on the western and a classic moustache villain
I say it's a good start because there a few things i like and dislike. I'll start with the likes. Your shading is great on this and it makes it dramatic and interesting, but then it looks like you forgot to shade in the face, the mouth works but without shading on it and no indication of lights it seems cartoonish. If you're going for a cartoon look, my mistake. The black back ground doesn't work because your character isn't blending well with it. There is so much dark in this piece that, in my opinion, drowns it out. If you had a light background with a dramatic shadow, i think it would make your artworks stand out more. But, all in all, I think it's a cool concept and keep up the good work.
Thanks for taking the time to critique my work dude, yea its still not finished all the way, still need to do the hands, hat and some more shading in a few places like the face and the mouth. I've been really busy writing a storyboard for my next short to finish this, so I just posted what I had done. Maybe when I finish I will do as you say and put a lighter background.
reminds me of mj!! lol
you don't really explain why you gave me a 6, but okay?
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