Her eye is scary, as a western animator I experimented with eye size and it's possible to make eyes too big, I see your going for an anime art design judging by the pink hair, hair tail, furry and thin lineart, not to sound rude but the picture has a overall 5/10 rating, your art would look a lot better if you like fixed the nose so she looks like a cat instead of Voldemort (the face is also too flat), drew the eyelashes correctly and shrunk the eyes, even SpeedoSausage hasn't been able to pull off massive eyes like that
You also made the arms too long, in females the elbows are supposed to line up slightly above the middle of the waist/navel
But the picture is cute and the shading is detailed